Jills Opinion, Double Page Spread

Jills Opinion, Double Page Spread

"Your double page spread is very good, i feel it is like this because you based it around a template and din't just go ahead and try make one on your own"

"Also on your double page spread i like the writing i think it is very formal yet pop like as you have made it stretch to the edges of the box with out distorting the letters"

"I think one thing that you could improve on with your double page spread would be matching the colours to the front cover and contents  page so you will have the same colour scheme going through the whole magazine, other wise the page looks kind of random and it doesn't flow with the rest of the magazine"

Jess's Opinion, Double Page Spread

Jess's Opinion, Double Page Spread

"The double page spread is good and effective, it has a very professional look about it. I like the way the title and head line are so different"

"I also like the pictures and where they have been put also the way that they have been used. The big photo is very sophisticated and the smaller ones look like she is just having fun which is good as it makes it look like she doesn't have a bad side to her"

"I don't like the text on this double page spread, I feel it is very minimalist and i think that there should be more" 

Beka's Opinion, Double Page Spread

Beka's Opinion, Double Page Spread

"I like the title 'SWEET' and 'LETS DO THIS', because it's quite original and looks effective as it has been placed behind her head. It is also effect because the words are in different fonts"

"I feel the images that have been used are very strong, and they also suit the pop genre which you were basing your magazine on. I think the use of different images by the headline stands out really well, and gives a quirky and interesting feel to the spreadsheet. It also shows the attitude and character of Paige."

"I do not think that the 'Pop Princess Paige' line looks as effective as it should be, and I think you could achieve to make it look stronger by making it bold and maybe a larger font, so it stands out better"

Amy's Opinion, Double Page Spread

Amy's Opinion, Double Page Spread

"I like the style of the title, i think it is very effective"

"I also like the smaller photos which are in the top right corner, they show that she has a good personality"

"I feel that the middle paragraph line one should be bolder as it looks out of place"

Jill's Opinion, Contents Page

Jill's Opinion, Contents Page

"On your contents page i like the way you have laid it out, it is easy to read and it is also easy to find your way around"

"I also like the bottom part of the contents page where you have placed the editors letter, this part looks very formal"

"I think it would be better if you change the numbers for the page music through the ages and put a back ground behind them so they stand out more"

Jess's Opinion, Contents Page

Jess's Opinion, Contents Page

"I like how the colour scheme matches the front cover and the contents page, if you saw them separately you can see that they are from the same magazines"

"I also like how you have laid out the pictures so that there is a main one and that there is smaller ones going down the centre of the page, it makes the page look less formal and more of a casual magazine"

"I don't like however the way that the boxes that out line the page i think it is a waste of space"

Beka's Opinion, Contents Page

Beka's Opinion, Contents Page

"You have used the colour scheme very effectively which matches the front cover as well, so you can tell that it's from the same magazine" 

" I like the fact that there are lots of different information and features to the magazine, because it makes the magazine more realistic and interesting to look at"

" The bottom two boxes on the left hand side are out of line and it looks messy and unorganised" 

Amy's Opinion, Contents Page

Amy's Opinion, Contents Page

"I think that the layout looks very professional"

"I also like the fonts which have been used because they have a nice style and they flow with the rest of the magazine"

"I do not like the background of the main photo because i don't think it is relevant with the rest of the magazine"

Jill's Opinion, Front Cover

Jill's Opinion, Front Cover

"I like the way you have don the tonal shading for the background, it is very effective and gives the magazine a professional look"

"I also like the way you have put boxes around the cover lines, this makes them stand out and makes you want to read them"

"I don't like the size of the name "Paige" i feel it over shadow's the title, i would make it a bit smaller"

Jess's Opinion, Front Cover

Jess's Opinion, Front Cover

"I really like the image you have used i think it shoes that the magazine is a pop magazine" 

"I also like the way you have laid it out, it works really well with the genre of magazine, also everything is visible and you can see your way around the front cover easily" 

"The one Criticism i have about your front cover is that the masthead i feel needs to be bigger as "PAIGE" over rules the title, it looks like it is called Paige and not "Sugar & Spice" 

Beka's Opinion, Front Cover

Beka's Opinion, Front Cover

" I like the photo because when you see the magazine you can tell that it is a pop magazine from the picture"

'I also like the way her name is written on the front cover, the colour goes well with the colour scheme and the font is very strong impact"

'I think that the cover lines are good as they are the same lay out but they have different fonts which gives it a different feel to the magazine"

"I feel that the mast head should be higher up, i think this because if it was higher up you could read all of it" 

Amy's Opinion, Front Cover

Amy's Opinion Front Cover 

"I like the colour scheme, i think its good how you have linked the colour scheme of the front cover to the contents page"

"I like the photo i think it has a good impact to the magazine"

"I think that you could change the cover lines as they over lap the picture therefore covering up the artist"

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Katy started to email Paige because Katy thought Paige had talent, it turns out she knows what she's talking about! 

They got together over lunch one day, Paige thought it was just lunch, but oh no ! Katy had other plans, they ended up going to a recording studio and Paige featured in Katy's unpublished song "Illuminate". After that Paige went on to making a cover of Katy's worldwide known track 'Friday Night'. 

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She Made her first appearance on YOUTUBE, she was a sensation. She got nearly 10,000 views in just one week by the second week it went up to 50,000. 

People were uploading it to facebook and twitter, everyone who saw it shared it and re-tweeted it. The person who saw it that changed Paiges life was, KATY PERRY. 

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We love Pop Princess Paige! 

Paige had first auditioned for the x-factor, she didn't make it to the televised stage. She first started singing ballads, but then she realised that wasn't getting her anywhere. She started looking at pop artists that were popular and that were in the top ten.  

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Paige took the world by storm! All the boys wanted to be with her and girls want to be like her. 

She is now turning up the heat for her new debut album "Sweet&Sour".

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Fans are still getting to know Paige Gibbons. Everyone met Paige for the first time when she was an extra supporting act for Katy Perry on her tour in 2011 of Europe. Paige was such a smash with the crowd with her first single "The Page Turner". When Katy Perry finished her set the crowd were cheering for an encore , but not from Katy. They wanted Paige back! 

Double Page Spread Head Line Ideas

Headline Ideas

• I was the girl parents blamed for their kids turning out wrong 
• Forget everything you think you know about Paige Gibbons... Read this interview now ! 
• Girl, You'll be a woman soon!
• People think i'm an attention seeker, But i'm just honest 
• Fiercely Creative  

Front Cover

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